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Dedicated to the DREAM!
Don't go far off, not even for a day, because --
because -- I don't know how to say it: a day is long
and I will be waiting for you, as in an empty station
when the trains are parked off somewhere else, asleep.
Don't leave me, even for an hour, because
then the little drops of anguish will all run together,
the smoke that roams looking for a home will drift
into me, choking my lost heart.
Oh, may your silhouette never dissolve on the beach;
may your eyelids never flutter into the empty distance.
Don't leave me for a second, my dearest,
because in that moment you'll have gone so far
I'll wander mazily over all the earth, asking,
Will you come back? Will you leave me here, dying?
-- Pablo Neruda
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Don't go far off, not even for a day, because --
because -- I don't know how to say it: a day is long
and I will be waiting for you, as in an empty station
when the trains are parked off somewhere else, asleep.
Don't leave me, even for an hour, because
then the little drops of anguish will all run together,
the smoke that roams looking for a home will drift
into me, choking my lost heart.
Oh, may your silhouette never dissolve on the beach;
may your eyelids never flutter into the empty distance.
Don't leave me for a second, my dearest,
because in that moment you'll have gone so far
I'll wander mazily over all the earth, asking,
Will you come back? Will you leave me here, dying?
-- Pablo Neruda
Featured by :
[link] [link] [link] [link] [link][link][link]Thank you so much!
Stock used: link: [link] link: [link] [link][link]also used my own ressources
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Copyright Notice:All my artwork is Copyright ©2008 Mimika. All rights reserved.All the materials contained in my deviantART gallery may not be reproduced, copied, tubed, edited, published, transmitted or uploaded in any way without my FULL written permission.
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Image size
783x732px 261.34 KB
Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
u810/S810
Shutter Speed
10/1600 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
7 mm
ISO Speed
64
Date Taken
Jul 3, 2008, 4:00:29 AM
© 2008 - 2024 mimikascraftroom
Comments83
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Overall Vision
Originality Technique ImpactThis is a very emotional work and technically almost perfect done. I don't understand every detail in the imagery but I love it either way. What I do understand is the sadness of the Pierrot because he doesn't want to leave and the little girl trying to convince him to stay. The rabbit and the rat pushing the luggage make lovely details. The faded background underlines the melancholic mood as well as the snowflakes and the cold icy ground the figures are standing on. The colourful lollipop marks the sweet center of the composition and adds hope and confidence to it. I think many people including me can relate to the scene because who doesn't know wrench?
All parts are well incorporated and there is not much that can be improved. The only obvious mistake is the missing shadow under the girl's dress and the umbrella. I think there should be a slight shading since both objects aren't in direct contact with the ground but are very close to it. Otherwise a very striking work!